题型解读
读后续写是随着我国高考改革由教育部考试中心研制的英语高考新题型，2016年10月在浙江省首次使用。该题型通过读写结合，检测学生的英语书面语言理解与表达能力。要求学生能够梳理故事文体的结构、分析故事发展的线索、想象故事发展的情节以及续写故事的发展和结局。
2020年山东省新高考英语卷首次采用读后续写题型。读后续写考题，提供一段350 词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容和所给段落开头语进行续写，将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文(150 词左右)。从试题结构看，读后续写评价的是书面理解能力和书面表达能力。因此，在写作之前，首先读懂文本，理清故事情节，然后构思故事的发展和结局。
命题特点
该题型一方面考查考生对所学语言的实际运用能力，另一方面也培养学生的发散思维能力。
读后续写不是随心所欲地写，而是根据题目要求，再读懂原文的基础上，利用原材料的素材、线索和情节等充分发挥想象力和创造力来续写。
通过对试题的分析，我们可得出读后续写的四大命题特点：
评分原则
1．本题总分为25分，按七个档次进行评分。
2．评分时，应主要从内容、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑，具体为：
- (1)续写内容的质量、完整性以及与原文情境的融洽度。
- (2)所使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。
- (3)上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。
3．评分时，应先根据作答的整体情况确定其所属的档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
4．评分时还应注意：
- (1)词数少于120的，酌情扣分；
- (2)书写较差以致影响交际的，酌情扣分；
- (3)单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
评分档次
第七档(22－25分)
创造了新颖、丰富、合理的内容，富有逻辑性，续写完整，与原文情境融洽度高；使用了多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达流畅，语言错误很少，且完全不影响理解；自然有效地使用了段落间、语句间衔接手段，全文结构清晰，前后呼应，意义连贯。
第六档(18－21分)
创造了比较丰富、合理的内容，比较有逻辑性，续写比较完整，与原文情境融洽度较高；使用了比较多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达比较流畅，有个别错误，但不影响理解；比较有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯。
第五档(15－17分)
创造了基本合理的内容，有一定的逻辑性，续写基本完整，与原文情境相关；使用了比较恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达方式不够多样性，表达有些许错误，但基本不影响理解；使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯。
第四档(11－14分)
创造了基本完整的故事内容，但有的情节不够合理或逻辑性不强，与原文情境基本相关；使用了简单的词汇和语法结构，有部分语言错误和不恰当之处，个别部分影响理解；尚有语句衔接的意识，全文结构基本清晰，意义基本连贯。
第三档(6－10分)
内容和逻辑上有一些重大问题，续写不够完整，与原文有一定程度脱节；所用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误较多且比较低级，影响理解；未能有效地使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不够清晰，意义欠连贯。
第二档(1－5分)
内容和逻辑上有较多重大问题，或有部分内容抄自原文，续写不完整，与原文情境基本脱节；所使用的词汇非常有限，语法结构单调，错误极多，严重影响理解；几乎没有使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不清晰，意义不连贯。
第一档(0分)
未作答；所写内容太少或无法看清以致无法评判；所写内容全部抄自原文或与题目要求完全不相关。
写作步骤
1．细读文本要素，品读主旨意图。
阅读是读后续写的起点，起点的质量高低直接影响着续写能达到的高度。
(1)在细读文本要素的过程中，考生应梳理关键信息，从内容层面弄清楚文章的体裁、题材、中心人物、主要故事、发展线索等；从语言层面感知语篇的语言风格、行文逻辑、故事发展等。
(2)在品读主旨意图的过程中，考生应从情感层面通过关键词和故事脉络来探究和确立文章的写作风格、感情基调、主旨大意等。读后续写不仅要求故事情节合理发展，也需要写作风格一脉相承。最佳的续写应是在内容、语言和情感方面与原文风格保持一致。
2．预测发展趋势，建构合理情节。
在提炼出人物、故事及主旨等文本要素后，考生应当结合两段续写段落的首句充分发挥想象，预测故事的大致走向进而勾勒出更加丰富、合理的故事情节。最后根据主旨和故事发展对信息作出选择、拓展细节、组织内容，从而完成续写这一创造性的思维过程。
3．梳理写作要点，善用语言，关注衔接。
在完成读后续写的过程中，细读是起点，建构是中点，写作是重点。在前面信息建构的基础上，学生将选出的信息和拓展的细节建构成故事发展的要点。写作中，学生还要注意与原文在文体和语言上保持一致。心灵鸡汤系列的文章语言应似和风细雨，娓娓道来；故事类的文章，用词应简单形象；短篇小说类的文章，结局较为意外，或讽刺或幽默或感人。此外，学生还应注意续写内容与所给段落首句的衔接程度，并确保所续写的内容和主旨积极向上、富有正能量。
高分策略
1．避免失分点
失分点1 不符合基本要求：词数少于120词；两段的词数比例失调；随意分段；时态错误；抄袭原文等。
失分点2 内容不合逻辑：缺乏合理想象；续写部分内容与上文不连贯：续写部分与已提供材料之间的逻辑，续写两段内容之间的逻辑以及续写部分与所给开头语之间的逻辑。
失分点3 语言不够丰富恰当：所使用语法结构与词汇的丰富性、准确性不够；刻意使用生僻词汇和复杂句式，不考虑与原文语言风格的一致性。
失分点4 脑洞开太大：想象不合理；续写部分立意不高；价值观有争议。
2．掌握提分点
(1)四审题目，不失基本分
①审要求：词数应为150词左右(不少于120词)。
②审体裁、时态：明确前文的体裁，确定续写部分的格式和语言；确定前文的时态，避免续写内容出现时态错误。
③审前文大意和要点：读后续写一般是记叙文，所以应找出前文中的六要素，以确保续写内容与前文的连贯性。
④审续写所给段首句：研读续写题目所给出的第一句话，注意续写内容与前文内容的融合性，以及所续写的两段内容之间的衔接性。
(2)三大技巧，巧夺能力分
①立意“高大上”，情节丰富合理(细节描写：动作、心理、评价与感悟)，使文章脱颖而出。
②升级词汇与句式，增加得分亮点。(高级词汇，句式灵活)
③书写规范工整，卷面开启“美颜”特效，巧得“印象分”。
词组积累
一、表示人物开心快乐
1．难以形容地开心：indescribably wild joy
2．极为感动：be overwhelmingly moved
3．几乎无法掩饰他的兴奋：can hardly conceal his excitement
4．既兴奋又开心：a mixture of excitement and happiness
5．激发某人的激情：kindle sb.with/to passion
6．显示出极大的意愿：show a great readiness
7．被强烈地吸引：be powerfully attracted to
8．心情愉快：in cheerful spirits
9．振作精神：keep up one’s spirits
10．满意的表情：a satisfied look
11．对……感到满意：be content with
12．对……很高兴：be delighted at
13．为成功而欣喜：be excited with joy at the success
14．被……场面所吸引：be fascinated by the spectacle of
15．被她的美貌所吸引：be fascinated with her beauty
16．因……而高兴：be joyful over/about
17．喜爱，对……着迷：be keen on
18．快乐至极：be overwhelmed with
19．高兴地跳起来：dance/jump for joy
20．欣喜若狂：be wild with delight
21．一个令人鼓舞的表情：an encouraging expression
22．过一个愉快的假日：have a pleasant holiday
23．心满意足，非常幸福：on the top of the world
24．对(做)……感到非常高兴：overjoyed at/to do
25．流下幸福的泪水：tears of happiness flow down
26．乐得大叫：yell with delight
27．使某人心情愉快：brighten sb.’s heart
28．使某人安心：set one’s heart at rest
29．感到鼓舞的：feel inspired/encouraged
30．精神高涨：be in high spirits
二、表示人物伤心抑郁
1．强烈的失落感：a strong sense of loss
2．陷入绝望：fall into despair
3．让他很伤感：put him into a sentimental mood
4．避免陷入消极的漩涡：avoid getting sucked into a whirlpool of negativity
5．哭泣释放苦闷情绪：crying gives some emotional release
6．减轻某人的痛苦/烦恼：ease sb.of his pain/trouble
7．因某人的死亡而痛心：break one’s heart over one’s death
8．使某人悲痛：make one’s heart bleed
9．伤心而死：die of a broken heart
10．悲痛欲绝：cry one’s heart out
11．怀着沉重的心情：with a heavy heart
12．沮丧的：with a sinking heart
13．忧郁的：with a sorrowful heart
14．惊慌失措：be seized with panic
15．有点惊讶：come as something of a surprise
16．感到疲惫不堪：feel exhausted and overwhelmed
17．很可能引发一阵挫败感：be extremely likely to raise a storm of frustration
18．某人突然感到一阵悲伤：a flash of grief comes upon sb.
19．情绪低落：be down in spirits
20．垂头丧气：lose one’s spirit
21．心里悲伤：be sad at heart
22．意志消沉：a broken spirit
三、表示人物愤怒怨恨
1．引起某人的不快：arouse one’s displeasure
2．对某人的行为感到不满：be displeased at one’s conduct
3．易为琐事而恼火：be easily annoyed at trifles
4．气得说不出话：be speechless with indignation
5．不断地抱怨：complain constantly
6．对……大发脾气：rage at sb.
7．怒火万丈：flame high
8．气得满脸通红：flame with anger
9．勃然大怒：fly into a rage
10．对某人生气：get irritated at
11．对某人勃然大怒：get mad/cross at sb.
12．愁眉苦脸：have a worried look
13．对抱怨不予理会：ignore/disregard a complaint
14．对……表示不满：express/voice a complaint about
15．怒气冲冲地跑出房间：run out of the room in a burst of anger
16．愤怒地跺脚：stamp one’s foot in anger
17．感到尴尬的：feel embarrassed
18．感到困惑的：feel puzzled/confused
19．感到沮丧的：feel frustrated/depressed
20．感到恶心的：feel disgusted/sickened
21．感到恼怒的：feel annoyed
22．感到愤怒的：feel irritated
23．感到泄气的：feel discouraged
24．充满怨恨的眼神：a resentful look
四、表示人物其他情绪
1．激发兴趣：find…highly stimulating
2．宽容的精神：a forgiving spirit
3．以和蔼可亲的态度：with a kindly and goodhumored spirit
4．某人对……一点也不感兴趣：not in the least be sb. interested in…
5．混合着焦虑与希望的情绪：mixed with the emotion of anxiety and hope
6．引起强烈的情感：set off strong feelings in the hearts of…
7．对……彻底上瘾：be hopelessly addicted to
8．在这些情绪的控制下：under the domination of these emotions
五、表示人物的外貌特征
1．优美的身材：a graceful figure
2．匀称的形体：a shapely figure
3．瘦削的身材：a skinny figure
4．细长的身体：a slim figure
5．发育良好的身体：a welldeveloped figure
6．仪表堂堂：an imposing/a dashing/a handsome/a striking figure
7．(人)形体很好：have a good figure
8．改善形体：improve one’s figure
9．看到月光下有一个模糊的人影：see a dim figure in the moonlight
10．炫耀某人优美的身段：show off sb.’s lovely figure
11．中等身材：an average build
12．身材魁梧的人：a wellbuilt man
六、表示人物个性品质
1．务实的：be downtoearth
2．保守的性格：conservative personality
3．缺乏责任感：lack of responsibility
4．具有……的美德：with the virtue of
5．责任感：a sense of responsibility
6．一个专心致志进行探索的科学家：a scientist bent on making a discovery
7．高素质、有经验的老师：highly qualified，wellexperienced teaching staff
8．脾气好的人：a goodhumored/goodnatured person
9．一个完美的人：a faultless/perfect person
10．一个有自制力的人：a selfpossessed person
11．一个疑心重的人：a suspicious person
12．有抱负的人：an ambitious person
13．聪明人：an intellectual person
14．个性强的人：a man of fine personality
15．容易相处的人：an easy person to deal with
16．冷酷无情的人：a coldblooded man
17．性情和善的男子：a goodnatured man
18．严肃的年轻人：a serious young man
19．头脑简单的人：a simpleminded man
20．能说会道的人：a smoothspoken man
21．消息灵通/见多识广的人：a wellinformed man
22．娴静有礼的淑女：a quiet，gracious lady
23．说话直率的人：an outspoken man
24．有教养的女子：a cultured woman
七、表示人物心理活动
1．鼓起勇气：master up courage
2．期待：in the expectation of
3．不顾对……的忧虑：regardless of concern over
4．感觉不适：feel out of place
5．毫无倦意：show no signs of tiredness
6．走神：keep drifting away
7．好奇地向某人看：throw a curious glance at sb.
8．对某事不存幻想：be under no illusion about sth.
9．不耐烦地听：listen impatiently
10．赞赏的目光：an admiring gaze
八、表示人物的动作
1．步态优美地走：walk gracefully
2．拖着疲惫的双腿回家：go home on tired legs
3．朝某人匆匆瞥了一眼：cast a hasty glance at sb.
4．听到远处隆隆的雷声：hear the thunder rolling in the distance
5．穿过田野的散步：a walk across the fields
6．爆发出阵阵喝彩声：break into shouts of applause
7．自吹自擂：sing one’s own praise
8．严厉训斥某人：give sb.a sharp scolding
9．一跃而起：jump to one’s feet
10．漫步向山里走去：wander into the mountain
11．散步；闲逛：have/take a stroll
12．来回踱步：pace back and forth
13．毫无目的地在街上游荡：wander aimlessly through the streets
14．臂挽着臂走：walk arm in arm
15．故意说：say sth.deliberately
九、表示天气
1．凉爽清新的风：cool，refreshing breeze
2．落日：the setting/declining sun
3．多雨的季节：a rainy season
4．暴风雨之夜：a stormy night
5．四面受风：expose to the four winds of heaven
6．连绵不断的雨：continuous/constant rains
7．在茫茫大雨中：in the blinding rain
8．深埋在雪中：be buried in snow
9．难以忍受的酷热：unbearably hot
10．在春天温暖的阳光里：in the warm spring sunshine
11．放晴：clear up
12．狂风暴雨：fierce/heavy/violent storms
13．及时雨：a timely/seasonable rain
14．沐日光浴：bathe/bask in (the) sunshine
15．在盛夏灼热的阳光下：under the blazing/scorching/burning sun of midsummer
十、表示地理位置
1．位置优越的城市：a favorably situated city
2．水下面的暗礁：a hidden rock beneath the surface of the water
3．一个偏僻的小村子：a small village off the map
4．离海滨仅咫尺之遥：within a stone’s throw of the beach
5．位于……最北端：be situated at the northern extreme of…
6．在群山环抱的村庄里：in a village among the hills
7．朝南的房间：room facing south
8．人烟稀少的农村地区：the thinly populated rural area
9．位于太平洋沿岸某处：be located somewhere on the Pacific coast
好句积累
一、表示心理描写
1．My heart began to race and my mind went blank.
我心跳开始加速，脑子里一片空白。
2．So many thoughts crowded into her mind，all at once.
那么多的想法突然涌入她的脑海。
3．So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood rush to her face.
她是如此的羞愧以至于脸如充血般发烫。
4．When the host announced that she won the prize，a wide excitement took hold of her.
当主持人宣布她获奖时，她的激动之情溢于言表。
5．His heart sank when he heard the news that he failed to win a prize.
听到他没获奖的消息，他的心情沉重。
6．On blue days you feel like you’re floating in an ocean of sadness.
在忧郁的日子里，你会觉得自己在悲伤的海洋里沉沉浮浮。
7．As a result of an accident，Tony was suddenly thrown into a world of darkness and sank into hopelessness.
因为一场事故，托尼的世界突然陷入一片黑暗与绝望之中。
8．Terror and death struck，and her heart was beating painfully fast，banging against her ribs.
恐怖和死亡袭来，她的心脏跳动得非常快，撞击着她的肋骨。
9．I felt that the blood in my body cooled/froze rapidly because of the terrible sight.
看到这可怕的景象，我感觉我的血液都凝固起来。
10．He was sick with fear，but the thought of the consequences urged him on.
他因害怕而感到恶心，但一想到结果，他还是要继续下去。
11．I wonder if it’s because I haven’t been able to be outdoors for so long that I’ve grown so crazy about everything to do with nature.
我不知道这是不是因为我太久无法出门的缘故，我变得对一切与大自然有关的事物都无比狂热。
12．I can well remember that there was a time when a deep blue sky，the song of the birds，moonlight and flowers could never have kept me spellbound.
我仍然清楚地记得曾经有一段时间，湛蓝的天空，鸟儿清脆的歌声，月光明亮，花香弥漫，从未令我心迷神往过。
13．I was a little nervous at first，but everyone was so nice and friendly that I soon stopped worrying.
起初我有点紧张，但是大家都那么友好，我很快便不再担心了。
14．The Eagles went home angry and bitter because they did not win the tournament.Meanwhile，the Kangaroos went home and trained harder than before.
老鹰队队员们回到了家，内心既愤怒又苦涩，因为他们没有赢得锦标赛。与此同时，袋鼠队队员们回家后，训练得比以前更刻苦了。
15．I felt so ashamed.I must be really stupid to fail a simple math quiz!
我感到很丢脸。我一定是蠢到家了才会连一次简单的数学测试都没通过！
16．Afterwards，I pretended to be cheerful，but Hannah sensed something was wrong.
后来，我假装很开心，但是汉娜觉察到了异样。
17．After a couple of weeks，the excitement started to fade，and homesickness started to set in.几个星期后，那股兴奋劲开始减退，想家的情绪开始蔓延。
二、表示环境描写
1．The sun began to rise in the sky，bathing the mountain in golden light.
太阳开始缓缓升起，给山披上了一层金纱。
2．The sun rose over a quiet world and looked warmly down upon the peaceful village.
太阳在一个宁静的世界里升起，温暖地俯视着这个宁静的村庄。
3．The sky is clear blue now and the sun has flung diamonds down on meadows，river banks and woods.
此时已是万里蓝天，太阳将钻石般灿烂夺目的阳光洒向草原，洒向河岸，洒向树林。
4．The rose looks like an angel，swaying in the wind，dancing in the sun.
这朵玫瑰就像是在风中摇摆、在阳光下跳舞的天使。
5．The grounds were covered with dark green grass through which stretched a straight white stone path.
庭院里处处是碧绿的芳草，绿草中铺着洁白笔直的石路。
6．The beautiful scenery is a feast for your eyes.
美丽的景色令人大饱眼福。
7．These sublime and magnificent scenes offered me the greatest consolation.
这些令人赞叹的壮美景色给了我极大的安慰。
8．Nanjing，an old city with a rich and celebrated past，yet vigorous in her new youth—how lovely she is!
南京，这座古老而又年轻的历史文化名城，是多么的可爱！
9．It was so quiet in the classroom that the sound of a needle in the ground could be heard.
教室里很安静，连一根针掉在地上的声音都听得见。
10．When we reached the top of the hill，a magnificent view of the sea greeted us.
当我们到达山顶时，我们看到了一片壮丽的海景。
11．The dark，rainy evening，the wind，the thundering clouds held me entirely in their power.
那漆黑的雨夜，刮着大风，电闪雷鸣，乌云滚滚，我完全被这种景象镇住了。
12．However，the lakes shone like glass in the setting sun and looked wonderful.
然而，湖水在落日的余晖下闪亮如镜，景色迷人。
13．The hut was dark inside so it took time for our eyes to adjust.
小屋内很黑，所以我们的眼睛需要点时间才能适应。
14．The room is in a mess，with pizza boxes on the floor and dirty dishes in the sink.In the corner，there is a garbage can around which are pieces of garbage and waste paper.
房间里一片混乱，地上扔了些比萨盒子，水槽里堆着脏盘子。角落里有一个垃圾箱，周围散落着废纸屑和垃圾。
15．Upon the arrival of spring，beautiful birds will sing happily in the park.
春天一到，美丽的鸟儿们就会在公园里欢快地歌唱。
16．The narrow windows admit little light into the room.
窗户很窄，只有少量的光能照进这个房间。
17．At the close of the afternoon service，we returned by an exposed and hilly road，where the bitter winter wind，blowing over a range of snowy summits to the north，almost grayed the skin from our face.
下午的祷告结束以后，我们沿着一条光秃崎岖的山路返回。冬日刺骨的寒风吹过大雪覆盖的山峰，吹向北边，吹得我们一脸苍白萧索。
18．The brightly burning meteor darkened the light.
熊熊燃烧的流星使光线都变暗了。
三、表示动作描写
1．It was obvious that the manager of the coffee shop was waiting for Li Fang to leave—he wiped the tables，then sat down and turned on the TV.
很明显，咖啡馆的经理在等李方离开——他擦好桌子，然后坐下来，打开电视。
2．His eyes stare at what is left of the brother’s dinner on table.
他的眼睛盯着兄弟俩留在餐桌上的残羹剩菜。
3．Oliver gets it from a desk and gives it to Henry like a gift.奥利弗从桌上取过信，像送礼物一样递给亨利。
4．The hostess screams，the other customers look at her and she puts a hand to her mouth.
老板娘尖叫起来，其他顾客都望着她，于是她用手捂住了嘴巴。
5．The owner，hostess and waiter all bow as Henry leaves.
当亨利离开的时候，店主、老板娘和服务员都向他鞠躬致敬。
6．Charlie first picks out the laces and eats them as if they were spaghetti.Then he cuts off the leather top of the shoe as if it were the finest steak.
查理先把鞋带挑出来，像吃意大利面一样把它们吃了。然后他把皮制的鞋头切下来，就好像那是最美味的牛排。
7．She stepped back appearing surprised and put up her hands，as if in defence.
她退了几步，显得很吃惊，举起了手，想要自卫。
8．He held her firmly in his arms and she felt the warmth of his body.She screamed，pushed him away and ran to her room for the rest of the day.
他把她紧紧地搂在怀里，她感觉到他身体的温热，尖叫了起来，推开他，跑进她的房间，之后一整天都未出来。
9．The boys who had never come across anything like this before started jumping out of the windows.
以前从来没有见过这种情况的男孩们吓得从窗户跳了出去。
10．Professor Higgins carelessly throws a handful of money into her basket.
希金斯教授漫不经心地朝她的篮子里扔了一把钱。
11．Eliza Doolittle：(looking at the collected money in amazement) Well, I never.A whole pound!
伊莱扎·杜利特尔：(惊奇地看着收集起来的钱)啊，我还从来没有见过！整整一英镑呢！
12．Mrs Pearce：(only half resigned to it) Very well，sir.(goes downstairs)
皮尔斯夫人：(似听非听地)好吧，先生。(随即向楼下走去)
13．Daniel runs into his bedroom and shuts the door angrily.
丹尼尔跑进卧室，生气地关上了门。
14．During the experiment，volunteers were asked to sniff various pleasant smells and unpleasant smells.
实验期间，志愿者要去闻各种好闻的、不好闻的气味。
15．The Eagle’s captain knocked the ball to the ground with his hand，and then kicked it and scored.The referee blew the whistle；the match was over and the Eagles had won.
老鹰队的队长用手将球击倒在地，踢了一脚，进球得分了，裁判吹响了哨子。比赛结束，老鹰队赢了。
16．She said that someone must have been spying on us in the washroom，but I didn’t believe her explanation.
她说肯定有人在洗手间一直监视我们，但是我不相信她的解释。
17．As I dropped my dad off，I watched him，dressed in his work clothes，getting his tools from the trunk of my car.
我让父亲下车，看着他穿着工作服，从车后备箱里拿工具。
18．He broke down in tears and was never going to let her out of his sight again.
他痛哭流涕，再也不会让她离开自己的视线。
19．Her father turned away as a tear of joy rolled down his cheek.
她的父亲别过脸，喜悦的泪水从脸颊上滚落下来。
四、人物外貌描写
1．He had a wide mouth and humorous grey eyes.
他有一张大嘴和幽默的灰色眼睛。
2．Two spots of color brightened/lit up her cheeks.
两朵红霞晕染了她的脸颊。
3．He has two big dark eyes under a pair of thick eyebrows.
在一对浓密的眉毛下是他大而黑的双眼。
4．I noticed that his eyes were black—coal black.
我注意到他的眼睛是黑色的——炭黑色的。
5．She arrived late for class，her hair wet and messy.
她上课迟到了，头发又湿又脏。
6．She was fairskinned，having reddish hair and long fingers.
她皮肤白皙，有着红发和修长的手指。
7．His stronglybuilt body and suntanned skin make him look like a sportsman.
他强壮的身体和晒黑的皮肤使他看起来像一个运动员。
8．Everything about him was old except his eyes and they were the same color as the sea and were cheerful and undefeated.
他身上的一切都显得古老，除了那双眼睛，它们像海水一般蓝，是乐观而不肯认输的。
9．He has sparking blue green eyes，thinning silver hair that spills onto his forehead，big ears，a triangular nose，and tufts of graying eyebrow.
他的眼睛闪烁着蓝绿色光芒，稀疏的银发散落在前额，大耳朵，三角形的鼻子和灰白的眉毛。
10．The young woman was tall，with grace and elegance.She had a great amount of dark hair that was shown in the sunlight，and a face more beautiful than any other，with dark，mysterious eyes.She was polite and wellmannered，with a tender look.
这个年轻的女人很高，且很优雅。她有一头乌黑的头发，在阳光下显得十分美丽，她的脸比任何其他人都漂亮，她有一双神秘的黑眼睛。她彬彬有礼，举止文雅，目光温柔。
五、人物神态描写
1．A dreaming look came over her face.
她脸上浮现出梦幻般的神情。
2．Her face was full of gloom and cruelty.
她面色阴沉，表情冷酷。
3．He smiled，his eyes full of laughter.
他露出了笑容，双眼充满笑意。
4．Her eyes gleamed and her fragile face broke into a smile.
她的眼睛闪烁着光芒，精致的脸庞展现出微笑。
5．Color glowed in his face and his strange eyes widened with joyfulness.
他的脸熠熠闪光，奇怪的眼睛因欢乐而大大睁开。
6．Aley became happy now and a gentle smile spread over her face.
阿利变得很开心，整张脸洋溢着温和的微笑。
7．She rode the rest of the way home wearing a Mona Lisa smile of peace and grace.
她带着蒙娜丽莎式的平静而优雅的微笑，骑完了剩下的回家路。
8．He was glaring down at me again，his black eyes full of disgust.
他又低头瞪着我，黑色眼瞳里充满了厌恶。
9．His eyes lit up when she walked into the room.A smile lit up her face.The smile spread across her face，which lit up his gloomy afternoon.
看见她走进房间，他两眼一亮。她笑了，脸上露出了喜色。她满脸的微笑，点亮了他阴郁的下午。
10．Her cheeks were glowing.Her tears mingled with the blood on her face，dropping her gaze.
她双颊绯红，泪水和脸上的血混在了一起，同时目光低垂，不再凝视。
六、高级句式结构
1．It was the first time in a year and a half that I’d seen the night face to face.
这是我一年半以来第一次目睹夜晚。
[句子结构：It is/was the first(second…) time that sb.＋现在完成时/过去完成时：这是某人第几次做某事。]
2．It was my sister who first had the idea to cycle along the entire Mekong River from where it begins to where it ends.首先想到要沿着湄公河从源头骑车到终点的是我的姐姐。
(句子结构：强调句It is/was＋被强调部分＋that/who…；from…to…连接where引导的宾语从句。)
3．All hope was not lost.不是所有的希望都破灭了。
(句子结构：部分否定)
4．Only then did we decide to answer violence with violence.直到那时我们才决定以暴制暴。
(句子结构：Only＋状语＋部分倒装。)
5．Never will Zhou Yang forget his first job at the office of China Daily.
周洋永远不会忘记他在《中国日报》办公室获得的第一份工作。
(句子结构：never等表示否定意义的词位于句首，句子用部分倒装。)
6．Among the painters who broke away from the traditional style of painting were the Impressionists，who lived and worked in Paris.
在那些突破传统画法的画家中有生活和工作在巴黎的印象派画家。
[句子结构：among(介词)位于句首的倒装句，who引导非限制定语从句。]
7．Frederick William Ⅰ，the King of Prussia，could never have imagined that his greatest gift to the Russian people would have such an amazing history.
普鲁士国王腓特烈·威廉一世绝不可能想到他送给俄罗斯人民的厚礼会有这样一段令人惊讶的历史。
(句子结构：主语＋同位语＋谓语＋宾语从句。)
8．There is no doubt that the boxes were then put on a train for Konigsberg，which was at that time a German city on the Baltic Sea.
毫无疑问，这些箱子后来被装上火车运往哥尼斯堡，当时德国在波罗的海海边的一个城市。
(句子结构：There is no doubt＋that引导的同位语从句＋which引导的非限制性定语从句。)
9．India has a national festival on October 2 to honour Mohandas Gandhi，the leader who helped gain India’s independence from Britain.
印度在10月2日有一个全国性的节日，以纪念莫罕达斯·甘地，这位帮助印度独立于英国的领袖。
(句子结构：名词＋同位语＋定语从句。)
10．Perhaps we ought to combine our ideas and provide a balanced menu with food full of energy and fiber.
或许我们应该结合彼此的想法，然后提供一个营养充足且富含纤维的健康均衡的菜单。
(句子结构：介词短语作定语，相当于一个定语从句which/that is full of…。)
11．Earlier that day，when they crossed the Rocky Mountains，they managed to catch sight of some mountain goats and even a grizzly bear and an eagle.
那天清晨，当她们穿越落基山山脉时，她们看到了野山羊，甚至还看到了一只大灰熊和一只鹰。
(句子结构：时间状语＋when引导定语从句＋主句)
12．Going eastward，you’ll pass mountains and thousands of lakes and forests，as well as wide rivers and large cities.
一路向东，你会经过重重青山，路过千千万万的湖泊、山林，还有宽阔的河流和大都市。
(句子结构：现在分词短语作状语；并列表达“A and B，as well as C and D”。)
13．As Victor Hugo once said，“Laughter is the sun that drives winter from the human face”，and up to now nobody has been able to do this better than Charlie Chaplin.
正如维克多·雨果所说：“笑是阳光，能驱散人们脸上的寒冬”，目前为止，在这点上没有人做得比查理·卓别林更好。
(句子结构：as引导非限制性定语从句；否定意义的词与比较级连用表示最高级含义。)
14．You may find it astonishing that Charlie was taught to sing as soon as he could speak and dance as soon as he could walk.
你会吃惊地发现，查理一会说话就有人教他去唱歌，一会走路就有人教他跳舞。
[句子结构：find it(形式宾语)＋adj.＋that引导的宾语从句；that引导的宾语从句中包含着as soon as引导的时间状语从句。]
15．They are so hungry that they try boiling a pair of leather shoes for their dinner.
他们太饿了，于是尝试着煮一双皮鞋当作晚餐。
(句子结构：so…that…句型。)
16．With all these attractions，no wonder tourism is increasing wherever there is a Disneyland.
有这么多引人入胜之处，难怪有迪士尼乐园的地方，其旅游业就会增长。
[句子结构：with＋n.作原因状语；(it is) no wonder＋…＋wherever/whenever/whatever…引导的让步状语从句。]
17．John Snow was a wellknown doctor in London—(and he was) so famous，indeed，that he attended Queen Victoria to ease the birth of her babies.
约翰·斯诺曾经是伦敦一位著名的医生——他的确太负盛名了，所以能照看维多利亚女王，并帮助她顺利分娩。
(句子结构：一个简单句和一个复合句合并成一句，很好地运用了插入语和符号来连接句子。)
18．The seats were comfortable and after a calming drink，which made us sleepy，our eyes closed.
座位非常舒适，喝了点镇静剂后，我们很快闭上了眼睛，感到昏昏欲睡。
(句子结构：非限制性定语从句插在主句和状语之间。)
19．Without the new paints and the new technique，we would not be able to see the many great masterpieces for which this period is famous.
没有新的颜料和新的(绘画)手法，我们就不能看到这一时代很多著名的杰作。
[句子结构：“介词without＋n.”作条件状语，主句(虚拟语气)＋介词(for)＋which引导的定语从句。]
20．It is easy to write and，like the cinquain，can give a clear picture and create a special feeling using the minimum of words.
它容易写，而且像五行诗一样，它可以用最少的词语呈现一幅清晰的画面，表达出一种特殊的感情。
(句子结构：It is＋adj.＋to do sth.，like＋n.作插入语，现在分词短语作方式状语。)
21．It seems amazing that at my age I am still fit enough to cycle 20 kilometers in an afternoon.
感到不可思议吧，像我这样的年纪，身体健康而且能在一个下午骑车20公里。
[句子结构：It(形式主语)＋seems＋adj.＋that引导主语从句。]
22．There is no doubt that the earth is becoming warmer and that it is human activity that has caused this global warming rather than a random but natural phenomenon.
毫无疑问，地球正在变暖，而地球变暖正是人类活动所致，而非一种无规律的自然现象。
[句子结构：There is no doubt that…and that…句式(两个同位语从句并列)；在第二个that引导的同位语从句中，又用了it is…that强调句型。]
23．I was about to go back to sleep when suddenly my bedroom became as bright as day.
我刚要继续睡觉，突然我的卧室亮如白昼。
(句子结构：be about to do…when…。)
24．The other two climbed down into the crater to collect some lava for later study，but this being my first experience，I stayed at the top and watched them.
另外两人向下爬进火山口去收集供日后研究用的岩浆，我是第一次经历这样的事，所以留在山顶上观察他们。
(句子结构：独立主格结构this being my first experience作原因状语。)
25．Just accept them for who they are，and give them encouragement to live as rich and full a life as you do.
要接受他们，给他们以鼓励，让他们能像你一样过得丰富多彩，充实美满。
(句子结构：as＋形容词＋a/an＋名词＋as的用法。)
26．Pressed by my friends and relations，I decided to send my invention to the patent office to get recognition for my successful idea.
由于朋友和亲戚的敦促，我决定把我的发明送到专利局，请他们对我这次成功的思路给予认可。
(句子结构：过去分词短语作原因状语。)
